问题描述：
| 短文改错。 短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出增加的词; 删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉; 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。 |
a lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. I was proud what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else in need. ______________________________________________________________________________________ |
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最佳答案： | Last weekend I went to the Summer Palace as usually. At about noon, I was enjoying my reading near a 1. usually-usual lake while suddenly I hear someone crying for help. I went up to see what was happening. I was shocking to 2. while-when 3. hear-heard4. shocking-shocked find a little child struggling in the water in the distance while many peoples were standing by without doing 5. peoples-people anything. Without any hesitation, I had pushed through the crowd as I took off my coat, but jumped into the 6. 去掉 had 7. but-and water quickly. I managed to reach him and carried him back to safety. To his great relief, the kid was saved. 8. his- my I was proud ∧what I had done. I hope everyone can give a hand when someone else ∧in need. 9. of 10. is |
